Mentoring – kind, constructive feedback on your writing

what I offer

One off reports on ‘finished’ work, & regular or ad hoc mentoring for work in progress for newbie writers through to published authors. (Trad, Hybrid, Indie or Self). I can provide support with submissions to agents & publishers.

I believe in giving kind, constructive feedback, and my aim is to help writers on to the next step of their journey, whether that be submission to agents and publishers, self-publication, or developing writing as a hobby. Choose what’s best for you – do you need help with a synopsis, a tricky chapter, or a full report? Do you want to develop your writing craft?

See below for my rates.

My qualifications and experience can be found here and testimonials here.

Please get in touch via the contact form in the first instance to discuss where you are with your writing and the help needed. We will agree a plan that best suits your situation.

Getting ready to submit to agents?

Synopsis

Margin notes and short report.

A follow-up read of redrafted synopsis with minor notes.

One-page single spaced 12pt font: £40.00

Query/ Submission Package

(Synopsis, Query Letter, Opening Chapters)

Full line edit, margin notes and short report.

A follow-up read of redrafted synopsis & query letter with minor notes.

Up to 5,000 words: £120.00

Full manuscript Review

For a finished manuscript, a review of structure, narrative style and voice, characterisation, plot, and any specific areas you need support with. Detailed feedback with comments in document and a full report.

Per 1,000 words: £10.00*

*If we have worked on your project previously, there may be a discount available.

chapters or chunks

For an ongoing manuscript, feedback on your writing at a line level, and support with elements of the craft. Send an agreed amount of words – weekly, fortnightly, monthly or on an ad hoc basis.

Per 1,000 words: £10.00

Beta read

This is suitable for a polished manuscript that is ready to go on submission. The purpose is to check overall sense, continuity, and pick up any inconsistencies. Although it’s not a copy edit, any typos or errors spotted will be highlighted.

Per 1,000 words: £7.00

ZOOM CALLS

Discuss feedback, brainstorm, advice about writing craft elements, help with plot etc over Zoom.

Per 1 hour: £30.00 (pro rata)

PAyment

Payment by bank transfer, sent when you email your work to me.

TEACHING & EVENTS

I teach creative writing online through Inkpots Creative

I am available for author talks, one off creative writing workshops, book group visits, school events & literary festivals. Please see my author website for details.